Following my stage review with Tiffany and Josh and the feedback they gave regarding the shoots that I had produced, I have decided to incorporate text within the shoots, to make it clearer that it is about the story that the images are telling rather than selling the clothes that are featured.
For the bookshop shoot I have decided to use quotes from people about books and reading that relates to the image on the page, I also cut one of the pages from the spread, adding one of the images on to another page, I know think it looks a lot better, and the quotes work well with the imagery -
For the Beach shoot I have decides to incorporate the rhyme for 'I do like to be beside the seaside, again linking the lyrics to the images that are on the page. I cut two pages from this shoot, however have then added one tracing paper page with some text on so that it lays on top of the image below. I am much happier with the whole spread, the two pages I cut out were both of the same outfit, and were in my opinion the weakest images in the spread and just didn't look very natural or Autumnal.
I also picked up the last batch of clothes from Vintage Per Sempre for the Land Girls shoot in a couple of weeks time.
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